love, peace, am i prson that look at one thing say nothing about it or am a person that look at some thing and cry and when im gone its all about me and no but me or am a person that look at things and think about all day, i ask my self every day what kind of person am i. Am i pink, yellow, green, or blue
i ask my self the same questions all the time not knowing.
i ask my self the same questions all the time not knowing.
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It's good to say what you need to say, but then go back and add figurative language (similes, metaphors, personification, alliteration) to make it more visual and lyrical. That's where you take control of the words with your ability to craft your poem. You didn't do that and so you did not get any points for using figurative language.
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