Tuesday, April 15, 2008
1. FREE VERSE life
when time pass my life hold still when the wind blow some people say it blows them to there future but to me things just say still why wont they move why cant I see my future things in my life are so crazy just the other day started crying for something i dont know when my life dont agree with me I pray for love and peace to come to me just then at that moment i can see my life of what I will be
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Your poem is certainly a fine example of Stream of Consciousness. I between enjoyed it. But you should have added a space between lines to create a second stanza as well as a simile to get another 20 points.
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